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Another coach, another AI email
Two weeks ago…
I tore apart a 7-figure coach's email that reeked of AI.
The bad news is:
I found another one.
The good news is:
It’s an opportunity for someone to pitch him and take over his emails.
The crazy thing is… this coach has a whopping 550,000 people on his email list.
And within seconds of opening his email, I spotted the same AI tells. Robotic phrasing that breaks trust with the reader.
So in my latest video, I picked apart a real email from a 7-figure coach, Dan Go.
I show you exactly what AI copy looks like in the wild so you can spot it in ten seconds on any prospect's list.
…Plus dozens of other tips to write emails that generate sales on repeat.
If you want more clients, start looking for coaches sending AI emails. They’re so easy to spot when you understand the patterns.
Brandon "Dan Go email breakdown" Storey
P.S. When you want the full system for writing emails that don’t sound like AI (plus the outreach to land the business owners who need it)…
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