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What I saw reviewing 25 pieces yesterday
The AI mistakes killing your copy
Hey, it’s Brandon.
Yesterday I reviewed 25 pieces of copy in the Six-Figure Copy Academy.
And the SAME pattern kept showing up: people are using AI in their writing/editing process (which is GOOD).
BUT…
They’re not editing out the parts that sound like AI:
Em dashes everywhere.
"It's not X, it's Y" on repeat.
Too many emojis, over-simplifying, and fancy words.
And 10+ other things AI loves to do that make your copy read like AI.
Why is this a problem?
Listen, I’m all for leveraging AI to write better copy, land more clients, and get more done in less time.
In fact, I recently added a new training in the Academy on how to use AI to create lead magnets for clients.
But if your prospect, client, or reader can tell you used AI, you’re going to break trust and convert less.
So tomorrow, I'm releasing a brand new training inside the Academy walking through every one of the AI tells so you can avoid them in your copy.
You’ll learn how to spot them in your own work, and edit them out before you send copy to a client.
Essentially, how to make your copy NOT sound like AI (even if you used it in your writing/editing process).
Three other things live in the Academy this week:
New copy feedback thread just opened up. You can drop a piece of copy, an audit/sample outreach google doc, or your portfolio audit. Drop it in by Monday so I can review yours line by line.
Daily copy job board. Every day, I’m finding and adding fresh leads and paid jobs inside the community. I’ve made $200k+ from these sources that I share exclusively to the Academy.
Next group coaching call is on Tuesday May 26 @ 6:30 pm EST. Bring your copy, your offer, and your outreach questions. You’ll get help in real time with your biggest bottleneck in your business.
Join the Academy and you’re in for:
The AI training tomorrow
Your copy reviewed by Monday
The live coaching call Tuesday
My complete 90-day copywriting course
Full access to my exclusive copywriting community
No contracts, you can cancel anytime.
Brandon “gonna be a good week” Storey
P.S. The Academy guarantee is that you’ll get your first paid client in 90 days or your money back.
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